Banango Cheesecake

Hi! I'm here to review your story. ^^ It’s flames danced in my eyes and I began to reminisce to myself, getting lost in my thoughts. Its, not it's. Because ...

Hi! I'm here to review! (duh) Sorry if the review will seem mean in any way. Anyway, here we go. And why am I just now finding out about it? ...

Hello! I'm going to review your work today! Also, she was very angry because she thought that I didn't deserve this Furious would be a better word for 'very angry'. ...

Try Firebirds Rising. It's not really a novel, it's an anthology. But it's good. I like the stories in it. Artemis Fowl Series. Not exactly fantasy, but a must-read. And ...

It has potential: it can go either way depending on how you execute it. I'd give it a 7/10. Here's my idea: Maximilian wants to rule the world. He's been ...

Hey! This is just the prologue for my novel, so he isn't fourteen yet here. It's kind of supernatural but it's set in the future so I put it here. ...

I didn't read through the entire thread, so I'm sorry if I repeat something. You know you're a writer when... You see a blank notebook and think it would be ...

Be stunned to silence for a while, before realizing what just happened. And then I'll call Apple/go to the nearest iStore and demand an explanation for what just happened. What ...

Hi! I'm here to review your work. Let's begin, shall we? As I looked up at the merciless eyes of the man who intended to kill me, pitch black, at ...

Hi! I'm Banango and I'm here to review your work. Let's start. Her voice was monotonic, and it sounded as if it was only her thick pay check that kept ...

The novel I am writing right now is inspired/influenced by the villain protagonist of the anime Death Note. (I'm on Light's side, not L's. XD) And my friend, (I'll call ...

Hi! I'm going to review your work today. The road with all its corrosive orange streetlights looked like some big centipede with fluorescent legs, too bright and not to mention ...

I started writing at around eight or nine. It was going to be a looooooooooooong story (probably a novella, or even a novel) about this guy who could save the ...

Hey there! I'm going to review your work. First of all, the huge block of text isn't attracting many reviewers. It almost scared me away too. Try breaking it up ...

Hi! I will be reviewing! XD Anyway, here's the review. Many of them were sitting upright, with eyes wide open. Many of them sat upright would be better because it ...